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A Mother's Heart

April 14, 2014
By MalaikaJ GOLD, Cloquet, Minnesota
MalaikaJ GOLD, Cloquet, Minnesota
19 articles 2 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emotions. - James Michener


Precious little boy,
running down the street.
Trips and falls in dust,
calling out for me.
I run and pick him up,
soothing with my words.
“Baby, I'm right here.
You're safe in my arms.”

Son all grown up.
Dragging his cross down the street.
Trips and falls in blood,
My heart calling for him.
I run and kneel beside him,
choking on my tears.
“Baby, I'm right here.”
No longer safe in my arms.


The author's comments:
Based on a scene from "The Passion of the Christ", an amazing movie, you have to see it.

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MalaikaJ GOLD said...
on Mar. 19 2015 at 11:13 am
MalaikaJ GOLD, Cloquet, Minnesota
19 articles 2 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emotions. - James Michener

Thank you!

on Mar. 18 2015 at 8:29 pm
itsyourmaingirl SILVER, Flint, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Show me a family of readers and I will show you the people who will change the world.

This was so amazing and beautiful. Great work.

HudaZav SILVER said...
on Jul. 8 2014 at 12:07 pm
HudaZav SILVER, Toronto, Other
8 articles 6 photos 390 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is impossible; the word itself says 'I'm possible'!" -Audrey Hepburn

I agree with that last comment, very powerful poem and imagery, well done!

on Jun. 9 2014 at 8:20 pm
malloryryan07 BRONZE, Brookwood, Alabama
1 article 0 photos 29 comments
Wow! That is such an accurate piece to the scene! Very well written.

MalaikaJ GOLD said...
on May. 29 2014 at 8:55 pm
MalaikaJ GOLD, Cloquet, Minnesota
19 articles 2 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emotions. - James Michener

Thank you so much! I suppose that's not an unusual mistake among writers. ;)

on May. 29 2014 at 1:44 pm
Haners456 SILVER, Scappoose, Oregon
7 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The Fault, dear readers, is not in our stars / but in ourselves." -John Green, Peter Van Houten

*right (i seem to always write "write" instead of "right")

on May. 29 2014 at 1:43 pm
Haners456 SILVER, Scappoose, Oregon
7 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The Fault, dear readers, is not in our stars / but in ourselves." -John Green, Peter Van Houten

I love it! I have seen The Passion of the Christ and your write it is an amzing movie! I've read all of your poems and they are amazing i hope you dont stop writing!